Rewrites can be so very demanding. I have about nine pages I'm redoing right now, and it's driving me bonkers. The new notes and ideas in my head are so much better than what I put on the page months ago. Tweaking the original document is not quite working out as well as I thought. So it's opening a blank page and re doing the entire thing! Thank God, there is no deadline.
It's worth it for the story, in the end.
"What on earth was that?" she inquired, but no one stopped their own revelry in the rain to answer her. She dropped her skirts despite the mud gathering under her feet in order to shield her eyes from the consistent downpour. Her head turned towards the continuing rattling noise, and then jolted at the sight of smoke billowing from a mechanized carriage.
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